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Nested Temporality in Writing: The Future Pasts

July 26, 2025

“The future ain’t what it used to be” is an oft-quoted sentence. It’s supposed to be funny, but few realize it contains a concept that is important to writing and philosophy alike. This sentence contains what I refer to as a nested temporality.

People usually think of the past, the present, and the future as easily defined, separate entities. They also don’t see much ambiguity and in-betweenness in them: there’s one kind of past, one kind of present, one kind of future.

However, this is not true. There are pasts contained in the past (indeed an infinite number of them), and pasts contained in the future. Perhaps it’s more self-evident that there is an infinite number of futures, too, if we went about defining the future as probabilities.

Oh, and if you’re interested in defining the present, good luck with that!

In this post I’m examining the concept of nested temporality – and I will begin with defining it more precisely – in the context of writing fiction. What does a nested temporality bring to a narrative, and how can we use nested temporalities for creative purposes?

Nested Time. Image of clock.
For purely practical reasons, humans tend to think of time as both linear and well-defined. Nothing could be further from the truth…
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Authentic Writing: Going Beyond “Originality”

August 19, 2024

Many writing gurus (🤮) keep parroting the mantra that originality in writing is good. They often don’t even bother to explain what originality is or why it’s good. When they do, rarely, it’s almost always about plot. As a result, we get overrated plots that are “original”, in the sense they are chaotic and nonsensical. Originality (especially when it comes to plot) is much less important than something else: authentic writing.

Sometimes people use these two words interchangeably, but there are crucial differences. Originality refers to rarity, whereas authenticity refers to something much more complex, which I’ll explore in this post: self-honesty.

authentic writing. image of a singer screaming
From the audience’s perspective, it doesn’t really matter if the artist (whether a writer or a musician, as in the photo) actually feels their art or they pretend they do. However, from the artist’s perspective, it makes your job a hell of a lot easier if you, quoth Bill Hicks, “play from your fucking heart”
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Understanding Depth in Fiction

June 3, 2024

For most people, depth in fiction sounds like a good thing, right? Just as we conflate vivid descriptions or rich vocabulary with high-quality writing, having a deep narrative must be a great thing, right? Right?

The thing is, there are so many fluid variables in the statement “Depth in fiction is a good thing” that it’s impossible to answer that in any sense-making manner before we truly focus on what it is we’re talking about.

That’s what I’m planning to do in this post.

I’ll first offer some definitions and reflection points on what constitutes depth in fiction and whether it’s always a good thing (sneak preview: it ain’t), and then I’ll list some ways that could add depth to your narrative – if you decide you need it.

depth in fiction. image of woman looking at the sea
This might seem just like a random stock photo to convey the concept of (visual) “depth”, however there is a subtle element crucial to my argument on depth in fiction. Namely, the balance between depth and width. If the camera angle was wide (imagine a drone image, high above the person), we wouldn’t quite get the same sense of depth as we do here.
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